by : ViRdA
Thesis
Position --> Nowadays, Our country has many restaurants that serve fast foods or markets which sell soft drinks. That’s why Indonesian people are used to eat and drink it. I personally think that those kinds of food and drink are harmful for our health.
Preview --> We better not to consume it every day so that we won’t get any problem later. You want to know why do I say that?
Argument
Argument 1
Point --> Even though some people think that fast food make us easier. But actually, there are so many dangerous inside them.
Elaborate --> Fast food are consist of high calorie, salt, fat, and also cholesterol that reaches 70%. Even have less fiber which is needed by human body. Fast food are also consist of preservatives and additive which cause us addicted.
Argument 2
Point --> But in fact, some people don’t care about those problems.
Elaborate --> They think that it will be fine if we consume it continuously because as far, they still don’t feel the effects in their body yet. It’s true that it won’t feel as soon as we eat it. But please notice, that the contents will be saved in our body and show influences in the future. In Addition, fast food is the way for us to get obesity quickly.
Argument 3
Ponit --> Soft drinks are harmful as well. It’s consist of many dangerous contents.
Elaborate --> Consist of CO2 that will cause stomach can’t produce enzyme which is important for our digestion system. Consist of caffeine which increase heart beat and blood pressure. Also have phosphoric acid which cause our bone become weak , especially for those who still in growth, there will be some fracture bones. Beside that, actually there are so many another reason why we should not to drink it. Yeah. I know that soft drink are fresh but for some reasons above, we will have consequences too.
Reiteration
--> From what I have told you above, we can conclude that fast food and soft drink are not good for our health. For a better future, why don’t you try to stop doing that from now on?
*Hope this help. But please, don't claim this as yours. I've been putting my hard effort for finishing this task. ^^ Thank you for reading and leave some comments.
